Melissa

Melissa's Realistic Fiction Tommy was finishing his homework as he answered the phone, 'Hello'? Tommy said as if he was asking a question. 'Hi this is Dr.Brown'. Tommy's dentist said in an extremely happy voice. 'I just called to tell you that you will be needing braces. 'What!!!! No!!!!!! Tommy screamed. The next day Tommy came to school wearing bright green braces. And that's when the teasing began. * ** James (the big bully who thought he owned the 6th grade wing) called Tommy metal mouth within 3 seconds,Tommy barely even got in the door. 'Hey metal mouth', James shouted. Tommy stared at him, James new he was angry.At lunch James called him brace tooth.In class James got Tommy in trouble because he was talking but James was the one talking.As a matter of fact James was teasing.After school James followed Tommy home just to call him metal mouth 18 times and run home. When Tommy got home he ran in his room and jumped flat on the bed as if he was belly flopping into a pool. He thought for a minute. Then he screamed 'Why is James bullying me lots more people have braces, Why' !?!?!?!, Tommy screamed. ' Tommy are you ok? Who is this James kid'?, Asked Tommy's mom. 'Don't worry I'll solve my own problems, he's just some kid at school', Tommy rudely said to his mother. ***The next day walking past all the lockers Tommy kept thinking how he is going to fix this, when will James stop bullying me he mumbled to himself hoping James wouldn't hear him.In class James kept passing notes to me. that said  //Hey metal mouth, whats that green stuff stuck to your teeth//? and //'whats up brace tooth?// Tommy couldn't even pay attention. After school that day, Tommy saw a seventh grader named Matt bullying James. When Tommy got home he finally realized why James was bullying him. That night ,Tommy called James and said, Hi James, its OK I know why you've been calling me mean names . You do ? ,James whispered like he was about to cry. 'So you know about ', James whispered just a little louder. ''Yes Tommy said seriously. '//do you want to be friends'''? **,**// they both asked each other at the same time. Yes Tommy said. So were friends, James asked. Definitely, Tommy replied. '' I'll help you stand up to Matt, don't worry. The next day Tommy & James walked to school together.At lunch Matt walked over to them and said Give me your left over lunch money. ''And what if he doesn't, because he is sick and tired of you bullying him like this, so just stop!!!!!!!! Tommy yelled at Matt. Matt backed off and never bullied James ever again and James never bullied Tommy ever again either. At least that's what they thought... Matt got really mad at Tommy for saying those things to him so he yelled back. But nothing can break James & Tommy's friendship so they stood up for each other and they where officially B.F.F.s.